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Water Dripping From the Skies

10/23/2014

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With eyes wide open in a cold dark room I lie helpless, motionless, bound by these emotions. My heart pounds fast, my mind works hard, hoping, wishing, for the knowledge to erase your pain.

My ink pen bleeds, like my eyes do, tears of pain, tears of desperation. It becomes harder to breathe, harder to live for a dream I once dreamt of a love so real, so strong.

Water dripping from the skies. Angry thunder pounding from within me. Let me in! Let me set you free! Let me love you until your whole again! Forget not that I am with you as hard as that may seem.

Flashes of light capturing these moments. Glimpses of shadows in the dark. My body trembles in fear, wishing it had you near.

Water dripping from the skies. Angry thunder pounding from within me. Let me in! Let me set you free! Let me love you until your whole again!

Water dripping from these eyes. Angry screaming from within me. Stay with me! Set us free! Love me until I’m whole again! Hold my hand! Caress my face! Be real to me! Be my man! Come to me! Make our dreams come true for me!

Water dripping from the skies. Angry thunder pounding from within me. Let me in! Let me set you free! Let me love you until your whole again!

Water dripping from the skies.

Water dripping from the skies.

Water dripping from the skies.

I close my eyes just to see your face again.


I wrote this on a stormy night the rain, lightning and thunder inspired me. I found i had a lot in common with the storm that night. I was angry, frustrated, and sad because I so longed to be with someone who was so far away. Who hasn't felt this way right? I hope you enjoy this as much as I enjoy sharing little bits and pieces of my soul with you all. Please like, share, and comment. Come back soon for more! 

6 Comments
Raul
10/23/2014 06:07:00 pm

I love it I felt so connected me gustan mucho las noches lluviosas y Los truenos I get inspired too and romantic :-)

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11/15/2017 04:04:34 pm

You have the talent in writing. I hope you will develop it further because I believe that there is a bright future ahead of you in this field. You have brought me to the situation I didn't think I could. It was a simple rainy night full of lightning, but you made it magical and appealing to your readers. How I wish I can write as good as you because I've been wanting to be a writer even then. I am hoping that God will help me improve my skills.

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4/16/2017 10:06:36 pm

This has a mood of stormy and rainy weather. And my current mood looks like this)

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